I saw your Supergirl picture and thought I would check out your page. You have several wonderful cosplay pictures. I do have to say that this one impresses me very much. I didn't think there was a way to do this costume in the real world and still have it comfortable enough that someone could wear it for any length of time. Well done
I can sound like a jerk just for pointing at this detail, but the key of this outfit is the "X" formed by the bare skin space between the collar, the bras and the shorts. Sorry but I can barely see it in your costume.
A fair critique but I really don't see what I could have done differently. I suppose my torso is long. It was hard to get this outfit to translate to real life and I was going mostly by the Greg Horn paintings of Emma which have less emphases on the "X"