I agree that the shoulder armor should be deleted: it looks (initially) like a mustache!... though positioning a new mouth could be tricky. Too, remove the small, white whatever-it-is [armor?] on/near your left shoulder: it detracts from your hair.
The composition and seductive pose are otherwise good: the photographer knew his/her stuff! The black column & boots, etc. provide dramatic contrast to your skin, and the red hair's an effective focal point against the limited palette of colors/hues.
One small point I'm undecided on: the seams in the floor lessen the strong diagonals of the window & your sword... but those would be quick & easy to PS out.
Gotta agree with all the comments so far. The pauldron is just blocking your face, which is a shame. On the plus side, we get a peek at a phenomenal butt. That plus alabaster skin and a nicely toned physique (check out the hamstrings) and it's a win.